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10. "RE: Thoughts on Novel"
That's a little odd. I'm sure I had changed my critique considerably, and dropped the bit on the hats and giving a British royal a surname.

Generally (from a very cursory reading, the sentance structure hurt my head) my issues were, this is set in 2050ish, but the cowboys seem to come from the 19th century? Why would Italy invade the US? there are easier targets with better resources a lot closer (and they don't generally have nuclear weapons). A Roman Emperor giving his daughter overt political power? With the devaluation of the term Caesar under Diocletian surely a new Italian emperor is more likely to style himself Augustus?

OTOH I think that the economic collapse has started, but all this seems to mean is that suddenly the Germans and my pension own everything, and it certainly isn't showing up in my pension statements.

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  Subject     Author     Message Date     ID  
 Thoughts on Novel   BWB2     05-19-13       
   So Where Is The Book?   foonermints     05-20-13     1  
   RE: Thoughts on Novel   Estee     05-20-13     2  
   RE: Thoughts on Novel   kingfish     05-20-13     3  
   RE: Thoughts on Novel   cahaya     05-20-13     4  
     RE: Thoughts on Novel   BWB2     05-23-13     20  
         RE: Thoughts on Novel   cahaya     05-23-13     22  
   RE: Thoughts on Novel   KeithFan     05-21-13     5  
   RE: Thoughts on Novel   Starshine     05-21-13     6  
     RE: Thoughts on Novel   foonermints     05-21-13     7  
         RE: Thoughts on Novel   kingfish     05-21-13     8  
             Righto!   foonermints     05-21-13     9  
                 RE: Righto!   cahaya     05-21-13     12  
                     RE: Righto!   foonermints     05-21-13     13  
     RE: Thoughts on Novel   Starshine     05-21-13     10  
         RE: Thoughts on Novel   cahaya     05-21-13     11  
             Cowboys vs. Aliens?   foonermints     05-21-13     14  
                 RE: Cowboys vs. Aliens?   cahaya     05-21-13     15  
                     RE: Cowboys vs. Aliens?   foonermints     05-21-13     16  
                         RE: Cowboys vs. Aliens?   cahaya     05-21-13     17  
                             RE: Cowboys vs. Aliens?   foonermints     05-21-13     18  
             RE: Thoughts on Novel   Starshine     05-22-13     19  
         RE: Thoughts on Novel   BWB2     05-23-13     21  

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