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"SSC4 (FF)- Changes"
Colby stood in the living room looking at Liz. Her voice mesmerized him. “I’m telling you that change can be a good thing. But change just for the sake of change is not a good policy and something that I can’t support.”, she spoke strongly. His attention drifted to her lips as they moved. Ivory teeth glistened in flashes behind the glossy red lipstick. Her face was lightly powdered in a vain attempt to mask her flaws and imperfections. Looking at her it didn’t take much to steer him in directions he knew he shouldn’t go. Those memories were from ages ago and just need not be dredged up again. But he couldn’t help it; he saw her and they were there in an instant.

He longed to reach out and touch her, to pull her close and kiss those soft lips. He remembered how passionate they used to be together and smiled. It didn’t matter where they were. If they were in the mood, and most often they would be, the hands slid to places that just should not be touched in public. She had a way of making him weak down to his core and it left him very vulnerable. Colby gave Liz everything he could, anything any other woman would be satisfied with. But Liz was no ordinary woman.

Liz was a very intelligent and ambitious woman. As much passion as she put into her lovemaking, she put into her work and then some. She was adored by most, hated by some, but no matter what people thought of her, they knew she had conviction. In the end, it was her ambition that got in Colby’s way. In the end, it was the ambition that won, and he that lost.

He snapped out of his trance as Liz’s opponent Shawn Douglas started to spout about tax cuts and the deficit. He watched the look on her face, the way the vein on her temple pulsed and throbbed as her slate gray eyes turned to steel. It was a look he had seen before on numerous occasions, and could tell that she was getting ready to give him a double-barreled rebuttal. Colby shook his head and laughed, “I’m glad it’s you buddy”. Suddenly he remembered why they had finally let the relationship end, maybe now he could let it go. He reached for the remote, changed channels, and then went into the kitchen to grab a beer.


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 RE: SSC4 (FF)- Changes woeisme1 07-28-04 1
 RE: SSC4 (FF)- Changes zombiebaby 07-29-04 2
 RE: SSC4 (FF)- Changes seahorse 07-31-04 3
 RE: SSC4 (FF)- Changes weltek 08-02-04 4
 RE: SSC4 (FF)- Changes buckeyegirl 08-02-04 5
 RE: SSC4 (FF)- Changes motormouth 08-06-04 6
 RE: SSC4 (FF)- Changes Flowerpower 08-10-04 7
 RE: SSC4 (FF)- Changes PagongRatEater 08-10-04 8
 RE: SSC4 (FF)- Changes Schnookie Palookie 08-16-04 9
 RE: SSC4 (FF)- Changes Scarlett O Hara 08-28-04 10

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1. "RE: SSC4 (FF)- Changes"
I loved this Katie! Great writing, you drew me in from the beginning and ended where I least expected. Awesome job hon.

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Great job! I lvoe the names!


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Great story. I had to reread it to make sure I understood everything.


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Great work-what a twist!

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Great job Katie!

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I love suprise endings!



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Excellent little snippet there, KO. You really have a gift with adjectives. You really should do something with this writing of yours....go for the dramatic, the mysterious, and the adventurous!

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Colby and Liz, eh? Love the way you paint a picture KT. Another success.


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What can I say Katie ... I adore your writing. You always pull me into the story and give a little twist at the end. I love it!

Thanks for sharing your great work with us!


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KOF- You really have a way with words! You need to get something published immediately! I LOVED it!

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