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23. "RE: Master Class Lady: Top 5 Rat P..."
I think she really nailed Kris on this one--his technique needs work and I'm guessing he hasn't had much formal training:

"Kris Allen “The Way You Look Tonight”

Strengths: Kris - you chose a beautiful song for this evening’s Rat Pack showcase and one that romantically connects singer to listener. You established an intimate connection with your audience by nature of the light timbre of your voice and your sincere, heartfelt aura.

Although you do not possess a large, multi-dimensional voice, you do use it wisely within the confines of your developing technical skills, allowing the emotional core of the song to regulate and heighten the successful performance of your numbers.

You have a wonderfully pure voice, Kris, and, despite all the technical problems that need correction (see your critique), you manage to center your pitch remarkably well. I almost sense that you may have perfect pitch or, at the very least, relative pitch.

Additionally the natural head resonance in your vocal timbre is also beneficial to this important element in solid vocal delivery.

Therefore, as this songs calls for a quiet, subdued approach, I felt that this classic song choice was very well suited to your vocal style and substance. The sensitivity and warmth that we felt while you performed this number is testament to the strength of your communicative skills.

And I cannot tell you how much I adored the uptempo segue into the final half of this song, followed by the rallentando as you moved to close the song. This variation in tempo and mood added wonderful aural and visual dimension to the number. You moved closer to the edge of the stage, thus further solidfying your connection with the audience. Excellent call on your part and kudos to the band for creating this lovely arrangement!

Wonderful work, Kris!

Critique: Kris - drop your jaw and open your mouth, child! Once again, that mouth remained in a fixed horizontally closed position, thus disabling you from accessing the strength and power of your diaphragmatic breath support.

As a result, I felt that the phrasing was really fragmented - you were breathing far, far too often and the song lost a great deal of momentum because of this technical deficiency.

Also, as you ascended the melodic line during the opening portion of this song, you had a tendency to reach for those upper notes rather than singing over them. Mentally, you have to adopt a descending melodic line when singing an ascending melodic line, but you also need the diaphragmatic technical skills firmly in place to fully liberate and focus your voice in your vocal masque.

And, as in last week’s Top 7 showcase, the exaggerated pause at the end of this number allowed the song to lose momentum and intensity when you most definitely needed it.

It would have been a much better call to extend the sustaining process on the word “look“, perhaps adding a decorative note or two. By doing so, you would have increased the natural flow and intensity of the final phrase, making certain that the forward momentum was not compromised at this crucial point in the song.

And intensity was what I felt was missing from this performance - there was not enough nuance and inflection in your voice because you are yet so inexperienced in the proper technical delivery of your vocal sound. The full power of your natural voice was trapped in your throat and, thus, was produced in an emaciated manner.

And, it was for this very reason that you did indeed reveal a crack or two in your vocal armor as you moved through your vocal range, particularly when you moved into your head voice at the start of the uptempo portion of this song.

Also, from a visual perspective, I would have nixed the mike stand and encouraged you to travel the perimeter of the stage solely with the mike in your hand. This method would have been more conducive in heightening confidence and style in your performance.

However, the good news is that you are here for another week, so, hopefully, you will have an opportunity to strengthen and deepen your technical skills. (fingers crossed, here!)

Congratulations, Kris! Best of luck next week!"

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  Subject     Author     Message Date     ID  
 Master Class Lady: professional cr...   zazzy     03-14-09       
   RE: Master Class Lady: professiona...   Belle Book     03-14-09     1  
     RE: Master Class Lady: professiona...   zazzy     03-16-09     2  
         RE: Master Class Lady: professiona...   Belle Book     03-17-09     3  
   RE: Master Class Lady: professiona...   okaychatt     03-18-09     4  
     RE: Master Class Lady: professiona...   Belle Book     03-18-09     5  
     RE: Master Class Lady: professiona...   sylvester     04-23-09     15  
   RE: Top 11--Master Class Lady: pro...   zazzy     03-21-09     6  
   RE: Master Class Lady: professiona...   zazzy     03-28-09     7  
     RE: Master Class Lady: professiona...   Belle Book     03-28-09     8  
   RE: Master Class Lady: professiona...   zazzy     04-05-09     9  
     RE: Master Class Lady: professiona...   Belle Book     04-05-09     10  
   RE: Master Class Lady: professiona...   mtb002     04-09-09     11  
     RE: Master Class Lady: professiona...   zazzy     04-09-09     12  
   Top 7 critiques   zazzy     04-17-09     13  
   RE: Master Class Lady: professiona...   zazzy     04-23-09     14  
     RE: Master Class Lady: professiona...   Glow     04-24-09     16  
         RE: Master Class Lady: professiona...   mtb002     04-24-09     17  
         RE: Master Class Lady: professiona...   zazzy     04-24-09     18  
         RE: Master Class Lady: professiona...   DoodleBug     04-28-09     19  
             RE: Master Class Lady: professiona...   mhdallas     04-28-09     20  
   RE: Master Class Lady: Top 5 Rat P...   mtb002     04-30-09     21  
     RE: Master Class Lady: Top 5 Rat P...   zazzy     05-01-09     22  
         RE: Master Class Lady: Top 5 Rat P...   mtb002     05-01-09     24  
     RE: Master Class Lady: Top 5 Rat P...   zazzy     05-01-09     23  
   Top 4   Snidget     05-07-09     25  
     RE: Top 4   DoodleBug     05-07-09     26  
     RE: Top 4   zazzy     05-11-09     27  
   RE: Master Class Lady: professiona...   zazzy     05-16-09     28  
     RE: Master Class Lady: professiona...   DoodleBug     05-18-09     29  
   RE: Master Class Lady: professiona...   zazzy     05-24-09     30  

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