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"WSC3(RP) Lessons"
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"WSC3(RP) Lessons"

A world gone wild, a world gone mad,
lost in the illusions of what we once had.
Hurling toward the future, yet still stuck in time,
trapped by the barriers we’ve built in our mind.

Marveling at the wonders of technology,
Fearful of the future left to our prodigy.
We hold our breath; we pray to the sky,
beseeching the spirit we once did deny.

The vision, so bright, in the distance does glare,
scarcely out of grasp, to our great despair.
Pushing away others, to the goal we do strive,
ravishing the land to be the first to arrive.

The lessons of those before always come back to haunt us,
with ridicule and scorn they forever taunt us.
Climbing so low, will we ever understand,
only when we unite will we be able to expand.


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 RE: WSC3(RP) Lessons Superman 01-06-04 1
 RE: WSC3(RP) Lessons Deonna 01-06-04 2
 RE: WSC3(RP) Lessons FarmBoy 01-06-04 3
 RE: WSC3(RP) Lessons northernlights 01-06-04 4
 RE: WSC3(RP) Lessons Silvergirl1 01-06-04 5
 RE: WSC3(RP) Lessons Swami 01-06-04 6
 RE: WSC3(RP) Lessons Drive My Car 01-07-04 7
 RE: WSC3(RP) Lessons GrendelsMom 01-07-04 8
 RE: WSC3(RP) Lessons DoodleBug 01-07-04 9

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1. "RE: WSC3(RP) Lessons"
Yay L8!

Normally, rhyming poetry doesn't do it for me, but? I like this! Yay!

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2. "RE: WSC3(RP) Lessons"
Beautiful, just beautiful.

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3. "RE: WSC3(RP) Lessons"

I knew it was in you! I love the rhythm of this poem!


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4. "RE: WSC3(RP) Lessons"
Poetry never has been my thing but I liked this a lot. Great job L8!


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5. "RE: WSC3(RP) Lessons"

I like this poem and the topics it covers in such a short piece. Good job, L8!

~Silvergirl~

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6. "RE: WSC3(RP) Lessons"
I like this a lot, L8.


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7. "RE: WSC3(RP) Lessons"

Oh L8! This is beautiful! The message is so hopeful, so thoughtful and important, and writen so well.

The rhyme and cadence is perfect, and that is so hard to do well.

I really like it!



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8. "RE: WSC3(RP) Lessons"
Nice message. Lessons indeed. Well done.

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9. "RE: WSC3(RP) Lessons"
I love rhyming poetry, and I love this. Especially this part....

"Climbing so low, will we ever understand,
only when we unite will we be able to expand."

Great work, L8!


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