The Amazing Race   American Idol   America's Next Top Model   The Apprentice   The Bachelor
Big Brother   The Biggest Loser   Dancing with the Stars   Survivor                Reality TV World
   
Reality TV World Message Board Forums
PLEASE NOTE: The Reality TV World Message Boards are filled with desperate attention-seekers pretending to be one big happy PG/PG13-rated family. Don't be fooled. Trying to get everyone to agree with you is like herding cats, but intolerance for other viewpoints is NOT welcome and respect for other posters IS required at all times. Jump in and play, and you'll soon find out how easy it is to fit in, but save your drama for your mama. All members are encouraged to read the complete guidelines. As entertainment critic Roger Ebert once said, "If you disagree with something I write, tell me so, argue with me, correct me--but don't tell me to shut up. That's not the American way."
"SSC4(FF) 'Danny Boy' and 'Hardball'"
Email this topic to a friend
Printer-friendly version of this topic
Bookmark this topic (Registered users only)
 
Previous Topic | Next Topic 
Conferences Story Competitions Forum (Protected)
Original message

Wheezy 9153 desperate attention whore postings
DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold"

07-29-04, 01:52 PM (EST)
Click to EMail Wheezy Click to send private message to Wheezy Click to view user profile Click to check IP address of the poster
"SSC4(FF) 'Danny Boy' and 'Hardball'"
These two are each very short, so I put them together.


Danny Boy

Whenever she sees those pearly snap-button shirts, she remembers the look on Danny’s face when he ripped her shirt open in the seventh grade, behind the stage curtain at the Civic Center. His face blushed dark red while the thick slides of trombones from the pep band rang in her ears.

And whenever she thinks of Danny, she remembers him three years later, when she saw him blink from his casket in the back of a dark, stained-glass windowed church. Danny’s dead body lured her from her practice, and she left the organ keys bare and the bench askew. The final chords she’d played from the blue hymnal hung eerily above the balcony, suspended like witches from the rafters.

###

Hardball

Every time she watches her son, the pitcher, playing sharp and focused on that old field of wavy sand and marshmallow bases, she remembers that night in '87 when she spent some time with another pitcher, intensely playing hardball under silver spiderwebbed bleachers near a gleaming harvest-mooned infield spread with shine and grit.

When her son kisses her goodbye after the game, and walks away swaying against a hippy fresh brunette whose ripe lips pucker like sweet caramel apples, a reverie caresses her round the shoulders like a bunting and she savors, for a moment, the moment, until it trips her eyes wide at thoughts of her thirty-four-year-old self, holding a caramel-appley grandbaby.


###


  Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

  Table of Contents

  Subject     Author     Message Date     ID  
 RE: SSC4(FF) 'Danny Boy' and 'Hardb... woeisme1 07-29-04 1
 RE: SSC4(FF) 'Danny Boy' and 'Hardb... zombiebaby 07-29-04 2
 RE: SSC4(FF) 'Danny Boy' and 'Hardb... seahorse 07-31-04 3

Lobby | Topics | Previous Topic | Next Topic

Messages in this topic

woeisme1 3588 desperate attention whore postings
DAW Level: "Thong Contest Judge"

07-29-04, 05:18 PM (EST)
Click to EMail woeisme1 Click to send private message to woeisme1 Click to view user profile Click to check IP address of the poster
1. "RE: SSC4(FF) 'Danny Boy' and 'Hardball'"
Wow! Just wow! I am so glad you entered these, you are incredibly gifted. My oversight for never telling you that before.

Fish and Game Officer of G.A.W.K.U.R's of OT

Handcrafted by RollDdice, who rocks my world as much as IceCat.

remember to say only things that, if it were the last words another person were to hear, would not have caused harm

  Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

zombiebaby 7021 desperate attention whore postings
DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold"

07-29-04, 08:57 PM (EST)
Click to EMail zombiebaby Click to send private message to zombiebaby Click to view user profile Click to check IP address of the poster
2. "RE: SSC4(FF) 'Danny Boy' and 'Hardball'"
These are great Wheezy! You can paint a vivid picture with such few words!


One more of J Slice's Awesome Creations!

The fellowship of the banana has begun...

  Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

seahorse 14337 desperate attention whore postings
DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold"

07-31-04, 06:00 PM (EST)
Click to EMail seahorse Click to send private message to seahorse Click to view user profile Click to check IP address of the poster
3. "RE: SSC4(FF) 'Danny Boy' and 'Hardball'"
I am glad I took the time to read these.


©Slice & Dice Chop Shop 2004

  Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top


Lock | Archive | Remove

Lobby | Topics | Previous Topic | Next Topic

p l a c e h o l d e r t e x t g o e s h e r e - p l a c e h o l d e r t e x t g o e s h e r e - p l a c e h o l d e r t e x t g o e s h e r e - p l a c e h o l d e r t e x t g o e s h e r e - p l a c e h o l d e r t e x t g o e s h e r e - p l a c e h o l d e r t e x t g o e s h e r e - p l a c e h o l d e r t e x t g o e s h e r e - p l a c e h o l d e r t e x t g o e s h e r e - p l a c e h o l d e r t e x t g o e s h e r e - p l a c e h o l d e r t e x t g o e s h e r e - p l a c e h o l d e r t e x t g o e s h e r e - p l a c e h o l d e r t e x t g o e s h e r e -
about this site   •   advertise on this site  •   contact us  •   privacy policy   •