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"WSC3(FF) Shattered Dreams"
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01-15-04, 03:44 PM (EST)
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"WSC3(FF) Shattered Dreams"
The clocks steady ticking reminded me of the nights we would stay up for hours talking, giggling, and planning for how wonderful things would be. Dawn always came, even if we never actually slept. The suns streaming hues of pink, violet, and amber rising up above the horizon were merely gentle reminders that the workday would soon take us away from each other.

Work was a necessity that didn’t pay high dividends; it served only to keep us apart. We yearned for the time to pass quickly. Then evening rolled around and thankfully we found comfort in each other’s arms. We were hungry back then. But our hunger didn’t affect us, nor did the lack of sleep for that matter. Each moonbeam carried its own special hope, each star a new promise of forever devotion.

When did it all start to change, I wondered. Was it me, or was it you? I guess in the end it doesn’t really matter. Silver clouds absorbed the moonbeams and captivated the stars until there was nothing left for us to pin our hopes on. We both strayed and betrayed each other. All that is left now are some words on a piece of paper. My eyes are swollen, my throat parched, my body is painfully numb. And still all I hear is the clocks steady ticking.


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 RE: WSC3(FF) Shattered Dreams FarmBoy 01-15-04 1
 RE: WSC3(FF) Shattered Dreams Deonna 01-15-04 2
 RE: WSC3(FF) Shattered Dreams Drive My Car 01-16-04 3
 RE: WSC3(FF) Shattered Dreams echogirl 01-18-04 4
 RE: WSC3(FF) Shattered Dreams Schnookie Palookie 01-19-04 5
 RE: WSC3(FF) Shattered Dreams L82LIFE 01-19-04 6
   RE: WSC3(FF) Shattered Dreams Sunny_Bunny 01-19-04 7

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FarmBoy 2618 desperate attention whore postings
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01-15-04, 04:22 PM (EST)
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1. "RE: WSC3(FF) Shattered Dreams"
Poetic and sad.

You so good!


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01-15-04, 05:38 PM (EST)
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2. "RE: WSC3(FF) Shattered Dreams"
Beautifully written. You can feel the sadness and pain.

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3. "RE: WSC3(FF) Shattered Dreams"
This really touched me Katie. So hopeful at the start, so lonely at the end, just like relationships can be.


..until there was nothing left for us to pin our hopes on


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4. "RE: WSC3(FF) Shattered Dreams"
Very sad but I really like this. So much emotion, so few words. I love FF!
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5. "RE: WSC3(FF) Shattered Dreams"
Beautifully written Katie!

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6. "RE: WSC3(FF) Shattered Dreams"
This piece is fantastic, Katie. It takes us on a journey of a relationship and reminds us that not all stories have a happy ending. Beautiful.



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7. "RE: WSC3(FF) Shattered Dreams"
Im with L8 on this one. Its just beautiful, Katie.



Remembers last competition, when L8 complained that my story had a sad ending lol.

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