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08-14-03, 11:33 AM (EST)
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"A Bor"
LAST EDITED ON 08-22-03 AT 03:01 AM (EST)

maybe I fixed this post.

A Flight

Oh, My God. Iím falling and I anít get up. But then my arms start Ö fluttering. Amazing. At least itís not going to be a freefall.

Help me. Iím tired already. Whereís Mom? Whereís Dad? Got to do something. This is gonna hurt, Iím sure of it. Oooch, noieses, danger.

I remember the danger chirps. Is that me screeching? Danger or rescue? Jeepers. OK, so, what now? I still have two wings operable. This is a plan, I hope.

Ground in so place for one of the air. Dang, my left toe. There is danger here. Must fly. Must fly, haha. Iíve seen it so often. But how now, brown cow? Can I get a ride?

Concentrate. Concentrate. Itís all aerodynamics, Mom said. Just be natural. Right.

A worm! A fish! Or is that a bread crumb? Stay alear already. Eat! Such competing instincts. Any movement is potentially a bad movement. Except for me fleeing for my life.

Hey, I got that bug! And for her, too! When did she show up? And wow, there are so many hidden beneath the grass. Youíve got to work for them, though.

Hmmm, I like her feathers. And the way she chirps. Such a wonderful song. Itís fun to do fly-bys with her. We even tell each other where the food is. I CAN keep up with her, mostly because she finds the sweeter things. I have to. I like her sweetness. I show her other fine things Iíve discovered. I hope she likes them.

And then we rest upon a high tree, and decide whether this is the nook. I think sheíll say yes.

Sheíll get to decorate, and feather. Iíll get to explore for more. Forage, maybe.

Jeepers, now thereís even more work.

-- Ra, Spinning in geo/helio eccentric orbit

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  Subject     Author     Message Date     ID  
 RE: A short one Ra_8secs 08-14-03 1
   RE: A short one SaphireLady 08-16-03 2
       RE: A short one Ra_8secs 08-19-03 6
   RE: A short one L82LIFE 08-17-03 3
       RE: A short one Ra_8secs 08-19-03 4
       RE: A short one Ra_8secs 08-22-03 9
 RE: A Bor Ra_8secs 08-19-03 5
   RE: A Bor Sunny_Bunny 08-20-03 7
 RE: A Bor Ra_8secs 08-21-03 8
   RE: A Bor Sunny_Bunny 08-22-03 10
       RE: A Bor Ra_8secs 09-09-03 11
           RE: A Bor Sunny_Bunny 09-09-03 12

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Ra_8secs 1081 desperate attention whore postings
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LAST EDITED ON 08-14-03 AT 12:06 PM (EST)

Oh, my God. I'm falling and I can't get up. But them my arms start flapping. Amazing. At least it's not a free-fall. Still scary as hell.

Help me! I'm tired already. Where's Mom? Where's Dad? Got to land. This is gonna hurt, I'm sure of it. Oooch! Noises? Danger! I'm hungry, too.

I remember the danger chirps. Is that me screeching? Danger or rescue? Jeepers.

OK, so, get up, you fool, I tell myself. I still have two operable wings. This is a plan, I hope.

Ground is no place for one of the air. Dang, my left toe. There is danger here. Must fly. Must fly, haha. I've seen it done before so often. But now now, brown cow? Can I get a ride?

Concentrate. It's all aerodynamics, Mom says. Just be natural. Right.

A work! or is that a bread crumb? A fish bit? A swish and aloft. Stay alert already! Eat Such competing instincts. Any movement is likely a bad movement. Except for my escape.

Hey, I got that bug! And one for her too. Where did she come from? And, wow, there are so many hidden beneath the grass. They take some time, though. Be careful. There are lots of bigger things than me. I'm so small.


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2. "RE: A short one"
hhhmmm, in the first person in regards to being a bird? INteresting take and view.

"Do you know, I always thought unicorns were fabulous monsters, too? I never saw one alive before!" "Well, now that we have seen each other," said the unicorn, "if you'll believe in me, I'll believe in you." Lewis Carroll; Through the Looking Glass
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6. "RE: A short one"
I was floatign along on various "Eagles Poems" and such. SunnyBunny is so wonderful.

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3. "RE: A short one"
I really like this, Ra.

Every year we have birds that nest in our yard. I always try to catch a glimpse of the babies' flight lessons because they seem so nervous and unsure. Your story fits their actions perfectly! Very cute.


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4. "RE: A short one"

I think I expanded it a little. Have desires for moreso. First person early bird -- chirpingly nice idea,eh?

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9. "RE: A short one"
TY, L82,

That's what I was going for. I actually reposted the story, apparently I truncated it or took an early draft (haha, there were only 2).

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5. "RE: A Bor"
I did, I did! Write so much a more filling and fulfilling story compared to this first drunken draft. Jeepers. it'll come

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7. "RE: A Bor"
Yes love, the retouched version is so wonderful! Post it!

Smooch!

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8. "RE: A Bor"
Thisis only about 2/3rds of the story! How did this paste happen? I'll fix it soon.

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10. "RE: A Bor"
Oh, much better love!!! Thank you for posting the rest of it!

Smooch!

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just bringing it back to the topof the list. But Mtn Junction is great


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Smooch! You know I love this story.


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