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arkiegrl 9083 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 07-15-05, 11:47 AM (EST) "SSC5(FV) untitled" The stench of his arrogance fills her nose and throat, choking her. His callousness slices through her, leaving her heart shredded and tattered. His contempt eats away at her soul. And yet, the sound of his voice still causes her pulse to quicken and throb. As she breathes in his scent, another throbbing begins deep inside her. She knows she will never be more than his whore, and hates him for that. She also knows she will never be strong enough to say no and hates herself. Crying bitter tears, she curses the fates that have damned her to this life.   Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

Subject     Author     Message Date     ID    RE: SSC5(FV) untitled brvnkrz 07-15-05 1  RE: SSC5(FV) untitled syren 07-15-05 2  RE: SSC5(FV) untitled Schnookie Palookie 07-16-05 3  RE: SSC5(FV) untitled cahaya 07-17-05 4  RE: SSC5(FV) untitled zipperhead 07-18-05 5  RE: SSC5(FV) untitled seahorse 07-18-05 6

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brvnkrz 20471 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 07-15-05, 03:03 PM (EST) 1. "RE: SSC5(FV) untitled" YAY!!! I really liked this piece muchly, Arkie. *smooch* when you love someone, you tend to see them as you want them to be, not as they are.   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

syren 5414 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 07-15-05, 03:06 PM (EST) 2. "RE: SSC5(FV) untitled" This expresses something that I think many woman have felt at one point in time. Not just women, but also some men. It is so hard to say no, but sometimes it is for the best, and this piece shows exactly that. Thank you so much for sharing it.   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

Schnookie Palookie 16822 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 07-16-05, 08:41 PM (EST) 3. "RE: SSC5(FV) untitled" Agree with Syren, too many people feel this way. Great writing Arkie!   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

cahaya 14104 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 07-17-05, 03:36 PM (EST) 4. "RE: SSC5(FV) untitled" Frighteningly stark verse that melds the dualities of love/hate, need/rejection, strength/weakness, yes/no, all inseparably. This is powerfully written, being very direct with inner certainty. "Timeless at lightspeed."   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

zipperhead 3387 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Car Show Celebrity" 07-18-05, 12:20 PM (EST) 5. "RE: SSC5(FV) untitled" I'm not usually a fan of poetry, but I greatly appreciate this piece. Good job.   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

seahorse 14337 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 07-18-05, 01:14 PM (EST) 6. "RE: SSC5(FV) untitled" Very powerful and well written. Handcrafted by RollDdice   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

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