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"SSC5 (RP) Woman of Cool and Night"
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calamityc 1041 desperate attention whore postings
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07-29-05, 01:18 AM (EST)
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"SSC5 (RP) Woman of Cool and Night"
I have not been so easy on you these past days it seems
For I have felt ever more like touching, more than in a dream.
I have wanted to evoke the senses in each way that I could
Experimenting felt like freedom because it was understood.

I'de like to give you solace, a word so seldom used
and yet the one that comes to mind when oft I think of you....

Comfort from the ordinary, rest from the mundane
To feather touch your fine strong arms and brush away all pain
To fall on you like cooling dew upon a parched terrain
So softly would I cushion you, a velvet cloud you could yet claim.

I would come to you as a whisper, so quietly would I stay
You would not be sure I still remained until a touch would lead the way.

For though you like the warmth and light
I am the woman of cool and night.

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 RE: SSC5 (RP) Woman of Cool and Nig... cahaya 07-29-05 1
 RE: SSC5 (RP) Woman of Cool and Nig... mysticwolf 07-29-05 2
 RE: SSC5 (RP) Woman of Cool and Nig... seahorse 08-26-05 3

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cahaya 14104 desperate attention whore postings
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07-29-05, 04:12 PM (EST)
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1. "RE: SSC5 (RP) Woman of Cool and Night"
Another uniquely touching verse, much different than your other entry (Since I Cannot Reach You). The touch here is more subtle and ethereal. It is quite a contrast to read about touch described in this way, giving comfort in dewlike coolness rather than in parched warmth.


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07-29-05, 04:53 PM (EST)
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2. "RE: SSC5 (RP) Woman of Cool and Night"
I like it. It drew me in. Good job Calamity.


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3. "RE: SSC5 (RP) Woman of Cool and Night"
Very nice, congrats on the first place finish.


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