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KObrien_fan 8204 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 07-14-05, 08:46 AM (EST) "SSC5- (FV) Paths" ~Paths~ A path carved for me does my existence make. I have no choice like Frost to choose which road to take. The ties that bind me are constantly there; I’ve little resistance left. The walls that protect me should elicit a smile, but comfort never comes. My heart yearns to romp and explore and be free, but my eyes look upon these chains and realize that can never be my world. It is safe and quiet here, why then do I protest? The seed that lies within my womb for me is my eternal tomb. My sacrifice for her someday may help to justify my pain. Is this what life is all about, giving your soul to save another? If that is indeed the case then I will soar like the eagle I long to be and through her eyes I can break free. This renewed hope I bear, drives me forward at an alarming rate. I believe that I can.   Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

Subject     Author     Message Date     ID    RE: SSC5- (FV) Paths pmspml5 07-14-05 1  RE: SSC5- (FV) Paths emydi 07-14-05 2  RE: SSC5- (FV) Paths zombiebaby 07-14-05 3  RE: SSC5- (FV) Paths cahaya 07-14-05 4    RE: SSC5- (FV) Paths Schnookie Palookie 07-17-05 5  RE: SSC5- (FV) Paths seahorse 07-17-05 6

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pmspml5 3191 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Car Show Celebrity" 07-14-05, 09:07 AM (EST) 1. "RE: SSC5- (FV) Paths" KO - I think you missed your calling and someday when your a famous writer - dont forget you pals kkk - like cause JK Rowling bought her pal a new flat in London!!!   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

emydi 13134 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 07-14-05, 10:30 AM (EST) 2. "RE: SSC5- (FV) Paths" very thought provoking kt   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

zombiebaby 7021 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 07-14-05, 12:19 PM (EST) 3. "RE: SSC5- (FV) Paths" Katie, You know you are the best! This is great. I just love reading all of your works. I don't know how you come up with so many different ideas! Look at me I got a Sweet Summer Syren Siggie!   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

cahaya 14104 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 07-14-05, 01:45 PM (EST) 4. "RE: SSC5- (FV) Paths" This in an interesting, introspective verse about life's fate and how personal choices may determine it. You present an internal struggle that questions both resigned acceptance and the urge to change things the way they are now. I like your optimism, the renewed hope, the idea that sacrifice may in turn have its rewards. I believe that you can, too! To me, this is inspiring verse. "Timeless at lightspeed."   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

Schnookie Palookie 16822 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 07-17-05, 10:25 AM (EST) 5. "RE: SSC5- (FV) Paths" I should just go around dittoing everything cahaya writes because he says it so well Katie, I adore your writings. Always have. I like the optimism at the end.   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

seahorse 14337 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 07-17-05, 01:18 PM (EST) 6. "RE: SSC5- (FV) Paths" Very well done, outstanding. Handcrafted by RollDdice   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

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