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PLEASE NOTE: The Reality TV World Message Boards are filled with desperate
attention-seekers pretending to be one big happy PG/PG13-rated family. Don't
be fooled. Trying to get everyone to agree with you is like herding cats,
but intolerance for other viewpoints is NOT welcome and respect for other
posters IS required at all times. Jump in and play, and you'll soon find out
how easy it is to fit in, but save your drama for your mama. All members are
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complete guidelines.
As entertainment critic Roger
Ebert once said, "If you disagree with something I write, tell me so, argue
with me, correct me--but don't tell me to shut up. That's not the American way."
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PhoenixMons 4696 desperate attention whore postings
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Preface: please don't laugh at this! I mentioned some stuff I wrote when I was younger in another thread. While looking for my Microsoft Office 97 CD (to put on my laptop which only has Works  ), I found one of the two pieces I was looking for. The other my mother has in Arizona and I know I have a copy somewhere...but I ain't finding it before I go home on Friday!I wrote this a long time ago. I was sixteen - rather racy for a sixteen year old, I know - but I had just started college and met my future husband (I knew he was "the one" almost instantly) and this was a present I made for him - framed it and made it all purdy. I was really proud of it - this was the last piece of creative writing I wrote - guess I wanted to end on a good note, LOL. I didn't want to tweak anything because I know if I started I'd never stop. So this is exactly the same as it was over 9 years ago (good grief). Posting this is a HUGE step for me. I am really embarrased about things I've written. They always sound good at the time but I read them later and think "wtf is that piece of crap?". This is one of the things I still liked even just a little bit after re-reading it many times.
You and I...
Eyes held quite conversations
Reciprocating desires and
Dreams of eternal togetherness.
Silently screaming for each other:
They met. Hearts kissed passionately.
Throbbing swiftly whilst
Love evolved
And sprouted wings:
They took flight. Souls made love
Throughout the infinite twilight,
Burning with passion.
Sizzling inferno fusing two souls into one:
They became we.
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01-19-04, 03:22 PM (EST)
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I would never laugh at something so lovely Phoenix! This is great!My favorite section: Eyes held quite conversations
Reciprocating desires and
Dreams of eternal togetherness. how cool is that?! 
Newest inductee into "the club." They even gave me a new tub to sleep in, see?
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