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FarmBoy 2618 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Survivor-themed Cruise Spokesperson" 01-12-04, 09:57 AM (EST) "WSC3 (RP) HOPE" LAST EDITED ON 01-12-04 AT 09:59 AM (EST) Ops! Free verse! Sorry. HOPE Behind the popsicle-stick picket fence On the newspaper yard Beside the matchbook car In front of the milk carton house Plays a dust-ball dog. She smiles as she brushes his hair And hopes All his dreams come true. ~ She wipes a chocolate crumb from his wireless laptop And thinks He'll grow out of this. Bovinated BR549- An Original Draco Masterpiece Sticking my left foot in...   Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

Subject     Author     Message Date     ID    RE: WSC3 (RP) HOPE Schnookie Palookie 01-12-04 1  RE: WSC3 (RP) HOPE L82LIFE 01-13-04 2    RE: WSC3 (RP) HOPE FarmBoy 01-13-04 3        RE: WSC3 (RP) HOPE L82LIFE 01-13-04 5  RE: WSC3 (RP) HOPE blacknwhitedog 01-13-04 4  RE: WSC3 (RP) HOPE Drive My Car 01-15-04 6  RE: WSC3 (RP) HOPE Tiggertramp 01-18-04 7

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Schnookie Palookie 16822 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 01-12-04, 03:44 PM (EST) 1. "RE: WSC3 (RP) HOPE" Very nice FarmBoy *Proud Member of the SoBe Lvoe Butt Connectors*   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

L82LIFE 5333 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 01-13-04, 12:59 PM (EST) 2. "RE: WSC3 (RP) HOPE" I really like this, FarmBoy. The milk carton house brings back some really fun memories. I like the way you turned the childhood toys into adult toys with the laptop. Well done. After reading this a second time, I really think the first verse would play so well to music. I can almost hear the tune in my head as I read it.   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

FarmBoy 2618 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Survivor-themed Cruise Spokesperson" 01-13-04, 02:40 PM (EST) 3. "RE: WSC3 (RP) HOPE" I write the lyrics and you write the music!! Bovinated BR549- An Original Draco Masterpiece I'd stick my left foot in, but I've got a kilt on.   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

L82LIFE 5333 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 01-13-04, 04:06 PM (EST) 5. "RE: WSC3 (RP) HOPE" I would, if I had any musical talent at all, but I have none. It did sound like a song the Beatles should sing, though.   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

blacknwhitedog 6480 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 01-13-04, 03:20 PM (EST) 4. "RE: WSC3 (RP) HOPE" Very nice feel to this one and then there was... IceCat!   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

Drive My Car 20045 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 01-15-04, 08:16 AM (EST) 6. "RE: WSC3 (RP) HOPE" She smiles as she brushes his hair And hopes All his dreams come true. *sigh* I agree with L8, it has a song lyric feel to it.   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

Tiggertramp 3141 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Car Show Celebrity" 01-18-04, 07:53 PM (EST) 7. "RE: WSC3 (RP) HOPE" Farm Boy...I really really really really loved this. The first line grabbed me and wouldn't let go. THAT is cool. I love it when words do that. Thank you!   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

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