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"WSC3 (FV) Dark Filled Room"
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01-08-04, 11:04 PM (EST)
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"WSC3 (FV) Dark Filled Room"
Dark Filled Room

Quietly
in the dark filled room

They lie beside one another
Neither one sleeping
Neither one talking
But saying so much

They feel the pull between them
like a magnet
But like charges repel

Both wanting to touch
But doing nothing
scared to say anything
But brave to test fate
Still they lie awake

Quietly
in the dark filled room

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 RE: WSC3 (FV) Dark Filled Room probably clueless 01-09-04 1
 RE: WSC3 (FV) Dark Filled Room FarmBoy 01-09-04 2
 RE: WSC3 (FV) Dark Filled Room Schnookie Palookie 01-09-04 3
 so sexy! cqvenus 01-09-04 4
 RE: WSC3 (FV) Dark Filled Room L82LIFE 01-10-04 5
   RE: WSC3 (FV) Dark Filled Room Drive My Car 01-11-04 7
 RE: WSC3 (FV) Dark Filled Room Swami 01-10-04 6

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1. "RE: WSC3 (FV) Dark Filled Room"
IMHO, as a confirmed sexual tension writing slut, this rocks.


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2. "RE: WSC3 (FV) Dark Filled Room"
It rocks all right! I can see the sparks flying over the bed!


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3. "RE: WSC3 (FV) Dark Filled Room"
LAST EDITED ON 01-11-04 AT 01:22 PM (EST)

Nicely done Doodles!

ETA: I have to say I was thinking along the same lines as L8 and Buggy. Your "Dark Filled Room" is exactly how I'm feeling after an argument with DH.


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4. "so sexy!"
okay that was hot.

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5. "RE: WSC3 (FV) Dark Filled Room"
I really like this, Doodle. I think this could be taken two ways, either as two people with sexual tension afraid to make the first move, or as a couple who are fighting and want to make up, but both are afraid to make the first move. I've been in both of those dark filled rooms, and you brought the memories back perfectly. Great piece.

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7. "RE: WSC3 (FV) Dark Filled Room"

I saw it the way L8 did. I feel a sadness in this, they want to reach out to eachother, but can't. There is a lonliness in the room.

I found it very moving.


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6. "RE: WSC3 (FV) Dark Filled Room"
Very nice, Doodlebug. It evoked a few memories for me, most of them not good ones, LOL!


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