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"WSC3 (RP) The Blizzard"
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"WSC3 (RP) The Blizzard" |
The BlizzardI place my hands upon my desk
and lean back in my chair.
I yawn and stretch and crack my neck
and count the hours I’ve been there. I make my way across the room,
trying not to get lost.
My floor looks like a blanket of snow
made of paper I have tossed. It amazes me the mess I have made;
I can’t even see my feet.
The snow has been falling throughout the day;
each flake a crumpled sheet. I can’t seem to find the right words
though I have plenty inside my head.
Maybe it’s not the words I fear
but rejection that I dread. It seems I may never allow you to know
These feelings that I keep.
The love I have for you, my dear,
will remain buried in the snow so deep. ###
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Wheezy 9153 desperate attention whore postings
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01-08-04, 06:13 PM (EST)
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6. "RE: WSC3 (RP) The Blizzard" |
"The snow has been falling throughout the day;
each flake a crumpled sheet."Best.line.ever.  WHEEEEEEZE!
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7. "RE: WSC3 (RP) The Blizzard" |
I love this Doodle!
Every line builds to the next, and it rhymes, which is hard to do well, I know it has been said before, but it is.
Really good!
Rhyming poetry either flows beautifully, or falls flat.
The piece flows so nicely.The paper snow metaphor is lovely. I've read it over several times and I like it more each time. Really good, really touching. I am so glad you shared it. The snow has been falling throughout the day;
each flake a crumpled sheet Lovely!
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