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01-06-04, 01:36 PM (EST)
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"WSC3(FV) Breed"
Why the hell are the children all laying naked
in a heap, in the corner, swollen and crying
for a morsel of a pinch of something to eat
yet, the parrot is so obese that he can reach his stoop
even though everything he mutters is trite and conceited
and senseless to anyone who even tries to decipher his
idiotic, feather brained prophesies and you know this
can't be healthy for him to be rewarded each time
his ill obtained knowledge from the paper beneath him
with all those shit interrupted syllables and the piss laced
headlines spills out of his fat, bloated beak

And I think the baby's dead on the bottom,
unlucky as she always was to just be in the wrong place
when the rest of them fell, boney and famished, unloved
and unclean in the furthermost corner from that
bent-bottomed cage, because they just couldn't bear to see one more uneaten
Ritz going to waste just beyond the reach of their tiny fingers
through bars that couldn't have been much weaker than the
bones that line their knuckles and the fingertips
that gnash the bits of cartilage
underneath their eyes that are fading so fast
that they stopped trying to see beyond the length of their elbows
much less down enough to notice their sister
has cooed her last breath

How many times must I come home to this
when all that I want is one tiny hug from one tiny child
with love in their eyes and milk on their breath
and be able to see meat on their bones instead of welts
on their skin and hollowed out cheeks
and then maybe I'd dream at night of board games and Sunday dinners
instead of Sally Struthers soiling scenes
screaming that she wants a fucking cracker
and I'd wake just once, with a smile on my face
and a song in my heart, instead of chewing my nails
to the grit of the dirt that's been there
since the last time I buried them all
behind the BP Station on Highway 43

Criminals From the Neck Up

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  Subject     Author     Message Date     ID  
 RE: WSC3(FV) Breed FarmBoy 01-06-04 1
 RE: WSC3(FV) Breed L82LIFE 01-06-04 2
 RE: WSC3(FV) Breed northernlights 01-06-04 3
 RE: WSC3(FV) Breed Silvergirl1 01-06-04 4
 RE: WSC3(FV) Breed Wheezy 01-06-04 5
 RE: WSC3(FV) Breed Drive My Car 01-07-04 6
 RE: WSC3(FV) Breed GrendelsMom 01-07-04 7

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FarmBoy 2618 desperate attention whore postings
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01-06-04, 01:43 PM (EST)
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1. "RE: WSC3(FV) Breed"
"with love in their eyes and milk on their breath"- perfection.

That's why he's the Supes.


Bovinated BR549- An Original Draco Masterpiece
I'd stick my left foot in, but I've got a kilt on.

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01-06-04, 01:46 PM (EST)
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2. "RE: WSC3(FV) Breed"
Very chilling, Supes. This piece sent shivers down my spine and I love it when that happens!


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01-06-04, 02:10 PM (EST)
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3. "RE: WSC3(FV) Breed"
Wow ~ like L8 I've got shivers. Nice work Supes.


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01-06-04, 04:29 PM (EST)
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4. "RE: WSC3(FV) Breed"

You're scaring me again, xray vision guy.

Scariest part - that Sally Struthers chick.

~Silvergirl~

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01-06-04, 11:22 PM (EST)
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5. "RE: WSC3(FV) Breed"

you know I love this one.

WHEEEEEEZE!

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6. "RE: WSC3(FV) Breed"

Love ya Superman.

I read this again and I still feel the same way.



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01-07-04, 10:31 AM (EST)
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7. "RE: WSC3(FV) Breed"
Read and admired all three of your poems here, but am especially fond of this one--very evocative.

A JSlice masterpiece

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