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"WSC3(FV) New Year"
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01-06-04, 10:38 AM (EST)
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"WSC3(FV) New Year"
January sank out in the year, slowly at first,
removing December’s inappropriate glow
and seducing days with quick brisk embraces
but then suffocating , smothering,
like a one too many times scorned lover
with not a hint of evidence
reduced to snatch at the air as her mate walks past,
and leaving behind all but darkened mornings
pursued by somber deathbed afternoons
yet, I sit laughing
waist deep in empty unloaded hours,
containing husks of virgin seconds wrapped
in the remains of godforsaken moments,
nonetheless, something amusing blows my way
and I cackle loudly
unaware of how mad I must seem
to the mundane, yet eager, February dawn


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 RE: WSC3(FV) New Year L82LIFE 01-06-04 1
 RE: WSC3(FV) New Year Swami 01-06-04 2
 RE: WSC3(FV) New Year Wheezy 01-06-04 3
 RE: WSC3(FV) New Year Drive My Car 01-07-04 4

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01-06-04, 11:41 AM (EST)
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1. "RE: WSC3(FV) New Year"
Supes, your writing always manages to reach into the soul and grab the reader, and I love that! Great poem, it captures the mood for this time very well.



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01-06-04, 08:33 PM (EST)
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2. "RE: WSC3(FV) New Year"
Superman, line-by-line the imagery is powerful, evocative and visceral. The words, the vowels--all drew me in. I so wanted to like it, but I just couldn't pull all the imagery together. (Of course, I am famous for not getting poetry...)


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3. "RE: WSC3(FV) New Year"

Awesome on so many levels.


WHEEEEEEZE!

like my boingy wheezy?

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4. "RE: WSC3(FV) New Year"

Wow! Oh wow.

yet, I sit laughing
waist deep in empty unloaded hours

Amazing. I hadn't read this piece before, and it just took my breath away.
So good Supe.
You do this so well.



I have such a crush on your mind

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