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"WSC3 - (FV) I'll Miss You"
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Silvergirl1 8694 desperate attention whore postings
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01-02-04, 01:49 AM (EST)
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"WSC3 - (FV) I'll Miss You"
What are you doing, smoking that pipe?
I told you it's bad for you,
but then again, it's not like I haven't done it myself.

Why are you pushing that needle in your arm?
I never did that and never thought you would either.
That's why you're laying here in the hospital.

You might have thought you would live forever.
Myself? I never thought you would die so young.
Not dead yet, but your brain is not functioning, they say.

We didn't get to do all the things I thought we'd have time to do.
I thought you'd at least get married and have children - nephews and nieces I could play with.
I thought I raised you better than to cut your life short with mind numbing drugs.

I want you to come out of the coma, now, so we can set things straight.
You'll meet a nice girl, move out of mom's house, and start a new life after this.
I know you will be happy.

But that must be in some parallel universe.
A universe that isn't forthcoming in this little world of family dysfunction and pain.
I only wanted to know you better, but now I never will.

~~~Silvergirl~~~

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  Subject     Author     Message Date     ID  
 RE: WSC3 - (FV) I'll Miss You FarmBoy 01-02-04 1
 RE: WSC3 - (FV) I'll Miss You Drive My Car 01-02-04 2
 RE: WSC3 - (FV) I'll Miss You Wheezy 01-02-04 3
 RE: WSC3 - (FV) I'll Miss You L82LIFE 01-05-04 4
 RE: WSC3 - (FV) I'll Miss You Superman 01-06-04 5
 RE: WSC3 - (FV) I'll Miss You northernlights 01-06-04 6
 RE: WSC3 - (FV) I'll Miss You Swami 01-06-04 7
 RE: WSC3 - (FV) I'll Miss You GrendelsMom 01-07-04 8

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FarmBoy 2618 desperate attention whore postings
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01-02-04, 09:19 AM (EST)
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1. "RE: WSC3 - (FV) I'll Miss You"
Very nice Silvergirl.

I liked this line: A universe that isn't forthcoming in this little world of family dysfunction and pain.


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2. "RE: WSC3 - (FV) I'll Miss You"

Oh wow.
Thank you for sharing this Silvergirl, so much feeling.


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01-02-04, 08:56 PM (EST)
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3. "RE: WSC3 - (FV) I'll Miss You"
Silvergirl, this is devastating. Full of sadness and regret and lost hope. Thanks for sharing it.
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01-05-04, 03:34 PM (EST)
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4. "RE: WSC3 - (FV) I'll Miss You"
SilverGirl, this is full of such raw emotions, that I can feel them vibrating in every word. Wonderful job, Sweetie.


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01-06-04, 11:32 AM (EST)
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5. "RE: WSC3 - (FV) I'll Miss You"
Very nice. Raw. I like.

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6. "RE: WSC3 - (FV) I'll Miss You"
Oh my, Silver. That made me want to go see my Brother and hug him very tight. Great work!


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7. "RE: WSC3 - (FV) I'll Miss You"
A beautiful poem of rawness & regret, Silvergirl. Could anything be more sad than that last line? only wanted to know you better, but now I never will.


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8. "RE: WSC3 - (FV) I'll Miss You"
really captures a feeling. thanks so much for sharing.

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