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"SSC3(RP) Love Storm"
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08-08-03, 04:03 PM (EST)
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"SSC3(RP) Love Storm"

Don’t let dark clouds disturb you
nor violent currents on the sea.
When waves seem to crash in on you,
think not of them, but me.

Let me be your ballast
Let me be your sail
Let love be your strongest hope,
and watch how you prevail.

Stand firm against the wave-walls
laugh at the fearsome wind.
And as the deck shifts ‘neath your feet,
remember us, and grin.

Let faith be your rudder
Let truth be your mast
Let love be your stalwart line,
and know that you will last.

Take courage from enduring love
that’s stronger then this sea.
The horizon may seem lost to you,
but know that's where I’ll be

Let me be your beacon
a lighthouse beaming bright
The storm will lose its power soon,
keep seeking out my light.

Soon we will stand upon the shore
locked in love’s embrace
and know there is not any storm,
together, we can’t face.

You will be my ballast
I will be your sail
Love will be our anchor,
and watch how we prevail.

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  Subject     Author     Message Date     ID  
 RE: SSC3(RP) Love Storm L82LIFE 08-08-03 1
 RE: SSC3(RP) Love Storm cqvenus 08-08-03 2
 Beautiful PlumBlossom 08-08-03 3
 RE: SSC3(RP) Love Storm Breezy 08-08-03 4
 RE: SSC3(RP) Love Storm SaphireLady 08-08-03 5
 RE: SSC3(RP) Love Storm Drive My Car 08-09-03 6
 RE: SSC3(RP) Love Storm Ra_8secs 08-10-03 7
 RE: SSC3(RP) Love Storm Schnookie Palookie 08-11-03 8
 RE: SSC3(RP) Love Storm Lisapooh 08-19-03 9

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08-08-03, 04:17 PM (EST)
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1. "RE: SSC3(RP) Love Storm"
I'm stunned, Bunny. This is just beautiful. You have a true gift with words. As I read this poem, I kept thinking what a beautiful song it would make. I can hear it in my head.

I love the way you used the imagery of a boat to describe your love, very touching. I love this poem.


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2. "RE: SSC3(RP) Love Storm"

I don't normally like rhyming poems, but this is *very* nice.

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08-08-03, 05:58 PM (EST)
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3. "Beautiful"
I love it, Sunny Bunny. Like L8, I thought it would make a beautiful song.


an IceCat original

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4. "RE: SSC3(RP) Love Storm"
Loved it especially this part.

Let me be your beacon
a lighthouse beaming bright
The storm will lose its power soon,
keep seeking out my light.


*Breezy ... keeping OT satisfied since 2003*


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5. "RE: SSC3(RP) Love Storm"
Great job. The story of love, well done without being cliche'.

"Do you know, I always thought unicorns were fabulous monsters, too? I never saw one alive before!" "Well, now that we have seen each other," said the unicorn, "if you'll believe in me, I'll believe in you." Lewis Carroll; Through the Looking Glass
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6. "RE: SSC3(RP) Love Storm"
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Oh I loved this!
Such a beautiful message of the strength in love. It is gently written but so powerful in message. I love the images of the sea.

I think those Loved by Bunny are very safe indeed.


edit to say - Bunny I am looking forward to reading your story, I want to wait til I have some quiet time to be able to read it fully.

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7. "RE: SSC3(RP) Love Storm"
Big smooches, 'Bunny.

I put this after the Helios/Emerald sea stories in Tales.

-- Ra, Spinning in geo/helio eccentric orbit

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8. "RE: SSC3(RP) Love Storm"
Wow Bunny, that is a beautiful poem. I'll say it again, I adore everything you write and can't wait to go read your other contributions.

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9. "RE: SSC3(RP) Love Storm"
This is so beautiful! Soft and touching yet really really powerful!

The rhymes don't limit you at all! They never seem forced and are really evocative and lovely. You did such a wonderful job here - they imagery and rhythm are just perfect!

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