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SaphireLady 2491 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Seventeen Magazine Model" 08-08-03, 12:48 PM (EST) "SSC3 (FV) Beautiful Beautiful Daughter" LAST EDITED ON 08-19-03 AT 05:39 PM (EST) My beautiful, beautiful daughter Full of life, full of life Her hair flowing in the breeze The eyes bright, shiny, and twinkling Her future bright Lays open before her The doctors statement The crying, the sorrow My beautiful, beautiful daughter Full of life, full of life Death comes knocking on the door Hold fast, stand firm Fight, fight, with all your might My beautiful, beautiful daughter Today you are full of life The future lays like a carpet at your feet The angel of death at the door, waits. My beautiful, beautiful daughter Full of life, full of life Keep the door closed tight Keep your heart, light and bright The love you have, overflowing the brim So that we have you till the end. edited to fix a typo   Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

Subject     Author     Message Date     ID    RE: SSC3 (FV) Beautiful Beautiful D... Sunny_Bunny 08-08-03 1    RE: SSC3 (FV) Beautiful Beautiful D... SaphireLady 08-08-03 3    RE: SSC3 (FV) Beautiful Beautiful D... SaphireLady 08-20-03 9  RE: SSC3 (FV) Beautiful Beautiful D... L82LIFE 08-08-03 2    RE: SSC3 (FV) Beautiful Beautiful D... SaphireLady 08-08-03 4  RE: SSC3 (FV) Beautiful Beautiful D... Drive My Car 08-09-03 5    RE: SSC3 (FV) Beautiful Beautiful D... SaphireLady 08-09-03 6  RE: SSC3 (FV) Beautiful Beautiful D... Schnookie Palookie 08-11-03 7    RE: SSC3 (FV) Beautiful Beautiful D... SaphireLady 08-12-03 8

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Sunny_Bunny 5430 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 08-08-03, 03:50 PM (EST) 1. "RE: SSC3 (FV) Beautiful Beautiful Daughter" Oh Saph, this poem gets me right in the heart whenever I read it. It's so beautiful, and full of feeling. Just wanted to say, for the record you write beautifully, so stop with the downplaying!   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

SaphireLady 2491 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Seventeen Magazine Model" 08-08-03, 07:07 PM (EST) 3. "RE: SSC3 (FV) Beautiful Beautiful Daughter" Thank you. This is my favorite poem. I can write some things, but you are the whole pkg. "Do you know, I always thought unicorns were fabulous monsters, too? I never saw one alive before!" "Well, now that we have seen each other," said the unicorn, "if you'll believe in me, I'll believe in you." Lewis Carroll; Through the Looking Glass   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

SaphireLady 2491 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Seventeen Magazine Model" 08-20-03, 04:41 PM (EST) 9. "RE: SSC3 (FV) Beautiful Beautiful Daughter" LAST EDITED ON 08-20-03 AT 04:42 PM (EST) Sunny Bunny I have a question for you. edited to change to making the question email, sorry. "Do you know, I always thought unicorns were fabulous monsters, too? I never saw one alive before!" "Well, now that we have seen each other," said the unicorn, "if you'll believe in me, I'll believe in you." Lewis Carroll; Through the Looking Glass   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

L82LIFE 5333 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 08-08-03, 04:12 PM (EST) 2. "RE: SSC3 (FV) Beautiful Beautiful Daughter" This is a very emotional piece, Saphire. The change in it's tone really took me by surprise and was quite nicely. This is one of those poems that stays with you afterwards. I love that in a poem. Great job.   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

SaphireLady 2491 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Seventeen Magazine Model" 08-08-03, 07:08 PM (EST) 4. "RE: SSC3 (FV) Beautiful Beautiful Daughter" Thank you. That is what this one is suppose to do. Glad it worked. It is also a true story. "Do you know, I always thought unicorns were fabulous monsters, too? I never saw one alive before!" "Well, now that we have seen each other," said the unicorn, "if you'll believe in me, I'll believe in you." Lewis Carroll; Through the Looking Glass   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

Drive My Car 20045 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 08-09-03, 12:49 PM (EST) 5. "RE: SSC3 (FV) Beautiful Beautiful Daughter" Lovely, really gets to the heart. I had to remind myself that your Daughter is well now. My beautiful, beautiful daughter Today you are full of life The future lays like a carpet at your feet The angel of death at the door, waits This part really got me.   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

SaphireLady 2491 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Seventeen Magazine Model" 08-09-03, 04:54 PM (EST) 6. "RE: SSC3 (FV) Beautiful Beautiful Daughter" Thank you, yes she is doing well, but it will always be a concern. She forgets to take care of herself, thinks her life is forever, but then don't all 22 yr olds (today is her birthday, so 22 today). She knows the problem is there, but if she ignores it, then it isn't, makes sense to her. "Do you know, I always thought unicorns were fabulous monsters, too? I never saw one alive before!" "Well, now that we have seen each other," said the unicorn, "if you'll believe in me, I'll believe in you." Lewis Carroll; Through the Looking Glass   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

Schnookie Palookie 16822 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 08-11-03, 01:26 PM (EST) 7. "RE: SSC3 (FV) Beautiful Beautiful Daughter" Very touching SaphireLady. *hugs*   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

SaphireLady 2491 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Seventeen Magazine Model" 08-12-03, 02:47 PM (EST) 8. "RE: SSC3 (FV) Beautiful Beautiful Daughter" Thank you. Even when I read the poem it still gets me.   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

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