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"SSC3 (FV) Sunday In New York With Ra"
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08-03-03, 11:44 PM (EST)
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"SSC3 (FV) Sunday In New York With Ra"
Sunday In New York With RA

With a leisure born from the knowledge
that time is a matter of knowing
how to expand on the now rather
then worry about the later,
Early in the morning
after a night filled with now's,
I feel the anticipation of
a Sunday in New York with Ra.

Leaving the gilt laden
pretension of that
hotel on 42’nd street
we explode into Grand Central Station
notebooks in hand
to head for a sidewalk cafe-
Brunch It Igor's!
Oh, the remarkable bliss
of Sunday in New York with Ra!

Over a light omelet, glass of orange juice
and those hash browns that
make artery’s scream “help me”
Our feet link under the table
We watch the people going by
and discuss with earnest delight
their stories...
That one is surely a dancer I whisper,
caught in a relationship with a Wall Street broker
who has bought her theater to ensure her success.

And that one, you say
Is a secret agent, here to watch and record
every move that redhead (a Russian Spy) makes!
As she gets up to make her escape
We follow her
and end up in a little art gallery.
She is soon forgotten
as we discuss the paintings and sculpture
with massive vocabulary’s
that hide the fact that neither of us has
any real idea what we are talking about.
Oh, the never-ending laughter
of Sunday in New York with Ra!

Leaving Soho, we head out to Battery Park
to peruse the vendors tents
and I smirk as you mock the tourists.
As we head out on the harbor
we sit on a bench on the ferry
and consider that man over there
standing at the railing, who is planning
to throw caution to the wind,
leave his lonely life behind,
and follow his dream of becoming-
A circus clown.
(well one can’t have great ideas all the time)

We hold hands, kiss, cuddle
stand at the railing on the upper level,
and you make some silly attempt at
throwing me over board
when I vainly try to avoid your camera.
We look at that lovely green lady
and I again promise that I will make
you President, provided you make me
your top advisor on foreign policy.
You naturally say “Of course Doctor Bunny-”
You're going over the railing soon!

Back in the gilt laden
pretension of that
hotel on 42’nd street
After we again exploit our
talent at finding the now-
In the warmth of your embrace
and the contentment of feeling
your sleeping breath in my ear
my arm across your waist tightens slightly
as I reflect on the perfection
Of a Sunday, in New York, with Ra.

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  Subject     Author     Message Date     ID  
 RE: SSC3 (FV) Sunday In New York Wi... Drive My Car 08-03-03 1
   RE: SSC3 (FV) Sunday In New York Wi... Ra_8secs 08-29-03 7
 RE: SSC3 (FV) Sunday In New York Wi... Schnookie Palookie 08-04-03 2
 RE: SSC3 (FV) Sunday In New York Wi... L82LIFE 08-04-03 3
 RE: SSC3 (FV) Sunday In New York Wi... SaphireLady 08-08-03 4
 RE: SSC3 (FV) Sunday In New York Wi... Lisapooh 08-19-03 5
 RE: SSC3 (FV) Sunday In New York Wi... Ra_8secs 08-19-03 6
 RE: SSC3 (FV) Sunday In New York Wi... Ra_8secs 08-29-03 8
   RE: SSC3 (FV) Sunday In New York Wi... Sunny_Bunny 08-29-03 9

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1. "RE: SSC3 (FV) Sunday In New York With Ra"
Oh Bunny! You had me at the first line. Perfect.

The People watching, the easy feeling, the jokes of lovers, the feeling I got reading it, so right.

I love this.

I admit I am a sucker for poetry, but this piece was just so full of feeling. I could read it over and over again.


With a leisure born from the knowledge
that time is a matter of knowing

Thank You!

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08-29-03, 01:42 PM (EST)
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7. "RE: SSC3 (FV) Sunday In New York With Ra"
She does good

-- Ra, Spinning in geo/helio eccentric o7
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2. "RE: SSC3 (FV) Sunday In New York With Ra"
I love your stories SunnyBunny. Look forward to reading more.


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3. "RE: SSC3 (FV) Sunday In New York With Ra"
Sunny, this piece is beautiful. It's fresh and fun and, well, Sunny! You take us on the ride with you and that is what makes it so endearing.


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4. "RE: SSC3 (FV) Sunday In New York With Ra"
I do love the way you write. Just takes me right in and along for the ride. Thank you.


Hope ya like my poems, though not up to your standard, I do like writing them.

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5. "RE: SSC3 (FV) Sunday In New York With Ra"
Sunny, I really really love the cadence and feel of your poetry!

This has a great lilt to it and youv'e got such active charming, memorable descriptions.

I'm digging it in a very big way!

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6. "RE: SSC3 (FV) Sunday In New York With Ra"
I'd almost forgotten how wonderful and beautifully flowing this piece is, 'bun. Smooch.

We HAVE TO DO NYC!

Love you, Ra

-- Ra, Spinning in geo/helio eccentric orbit

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8. "RE: SSC3 (FV) Sunday In New York With Ra"
Jhave I said I love you enough? Not likely

-- Ra, Spinning in geo/helio eccentric orbitg7

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9. "RE: SSC3 (FV) Sunday In New York With Ra"
My love, you know I will never tire of hearing it, but it's when you do something like this, that makes me love you even more.

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