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L82LIFE 5333 desperate attention whore postings
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01-31-03, 04:28 PM (EST)
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"WSC2 (RP)Saved"
I've worked and reworked this one, I'm just not sure that it's worthy yet of it's recipient. But, if the still unfinished poem that I've been working on since my son's birth is any indication (he's 15 now), then I may never get it the way I want it. So, this is it-for now.LOL


Saved

I thought my heart was full,
that my soul was finally complete.
My future sparkled-a shining jewel,
nothing more did I need.

Then emptiness came crashing in,
for me an unwelcome sight.
What had happened to what had been,
when everything had seemed alright?

Something must change but where,
what was the place to start?
Down on my knees, offering a prayer,
for the joy to return to my heart.

The answer came; so small, so pure,
bundled in pink from head to toe.
In those unfocused eyes my heart found it's cure,
my soul shined bright with new glow.

Soft downy skin, fresh and new,
rosebud lips with a smile to give.
Completely done in by one tiny, "coo",
saved by a miracle; an new life to live.



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 RE: WSC2 (RP)Saved Red Lady 01-31-03 1
 RE: WSC2 (RP)Saved echogirl 02-02-03 2
 RE: WSC2 (RP)Saved Drive My Car 02-02-03 3

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Red Lady 2009 desperate attention whore postings
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01-31-03, 04:30 PM (EST)
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1. "RE: WSC2 (RP)Saved"
Awwww L8....this just warms my heart! So beautifully written!

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2. "RE: WSC2 (RP)Saved"
Hi L8!

I think it is worthy! What a beautiful, heartfelt poem! This is really, really good L8!


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3. "RE: WSC2 (RP)Saved"
I like it a lot L8!
It feels complete to me.


Completely done in by one tiny, "coo",
saved by a miracle; an new life to live.

I love the line it ends on.


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