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echogirl 2120 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Roller Coaster Inaugurator" 01-27-03, 02:22 AM (EST) "WSC2 (FF) Quite Unusual" LAST EDITED ON 01-29-03 AT 04:39 PM (EST) Funny how I often find myself there. And the music played... And I felt like And I felt like being numbed, I felt like mesmerized Perhaps it was the spirits, perhaps it was the music, or perhaps all of the Beautiful People. And I was one. Dressed in black from head to toe the darkness shadowed my purity. And the music played... He was sumptuous. God-like with his flowing black mane, a silver cross dangling from his neck, and a smile that could part a thousand seas. He presented himself with single white rose and a kiss. I was tantalized by his whimsical charm, awestruck by his beauty. I was his. Charmed by his touch, his hands expeditiously find my breasts and my tongue his velvet lips. And the music played... Suddenly a sweet caress. Hands not strong, instead a delicate satin touch. And then I heard the voice of an angel beckoning me. She was enchanting. I was spellbound. Our eyes clocked, our thighs rocked, and our lips locked in perfect harmony. And the music played... He was a tower of strength with his blonde curly locks and chest of steel. A mystical martyr with a voice as deep as the darkened night. One magical word and I could not resist his gravity’s pull. Immersed in his arms, his passion I touched. And the music played... Perhaps the spirits had taken over or perhaps I was amiss, someplace I had never been before. Yet I didn’t seem to care because I was not alone. They were all there with me. And they were beautiful. I gaze out the window at the downtown skyline, a majesty of guiding lights. I had been touched. And the music played... A voice christened me to another room. Enraptured I follow the voice to the bedroom. They were all there with me. And they were beautiful. Perhaps I should go now I muse, yet the spirits captivated me. "Come now," they summon. Inviting, I undrape. And the music played... The sun beams down his unmerciful fury as I wake. I massage my eyes to the strangely unfamiliar clutching a single white rose. ************ I'm not crazy about this piece, it could use some more tweaking, but I needed to enter something! Song lyrics in italics by Front 242   Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

Subject     Author     Message Date     ID    RE: WSC2 (FF) Quite Unusual Wheezy 01-27-03 1  RE: WSC2 (FF) Quite Unusual L82LIFE 01-27-03 2  RE: WSC2 (FF) Quite Unusual Superman 01-28-03 3    RE: WSC2 (FF) Quite Unusual Wheezy 01-29-03 4  RE: WSC2 (FF) Quite Unusual Drive My Car 01-31-03 5

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Wheezy 9153 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 01-27-03, 10:52 AM (EST) 1. "RE: WSC2 (FF) Quite Unusual" YAY!!! You sneaky girl. I wondered if that was you at Crims. I like how you revised this! "Our eyes clocked, our thighs rocked, and our lips locked in perfect harmony." I said this before, but I LOVE this line!   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

L82LIFE 5333 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 01-27-03, 04:14 PM (EST) 2. "RE: WSC2 (FF) Quite Unusual" This piece really captured me, Echo. I read it three times, and it got better each time. Very sensual and erotic, yet still innocent. Great read, thank you for sharing.   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

Superman 3152 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Car Show Celebrity" 01-28-03, 07:30 PM (EST) 3. "RE: WSC2 (FF) Quite Unusual" Woo! Sexy! I like it! Superman - Who, unlike Wheezy, would have never guessed. Criminals From the Neck Up   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

Wheezy 9153 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 01-29-03, 08:07 PM (EST) 4. "RE: WSC2 (FF) Quite Unusual" *wink* it's that woman's intuition thang. *waves to Supes*   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

Drive My Car 20045 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 01-31-03, 08:52 AM (EST) 5. "RE: WSC2 (FF) Quite Unusual" Did someone say erotic? Wow Echo! Not just the words, but the flow of the piece has a senuous feel to it. Really Good   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

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