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"WSC2(FV) Free Man"
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01-23-03, 10:12 PM (EST)
 
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"WSC2(FV) Free Man" |
Free Man
Through the window, my possessions fall
Landing with a “boom”, “clang” or “slam”
But I take a quick liking
To the satisfying bark of "shatter"
And they build in the alley; my alley,
My ravine
Into a pile, then a mound
Then a ladder Out the window and down
Toes in toaster slots
And fingers in fish tanks
To the bottom From the street, I look back to the heap
A poet’s wet dream
Equal parts bleakness,
Opportunity, and shit Each begging for a metaphor,
A description,
At the very least recognition
Or just one adjective The pile as a whole does, too
You can see it in the sway
It seeks more --
Deification, perchance I turn and walk,
A free man now
Without the time or talent
Or patience for such things
Superman - thanks sami 
Criminals From the Neck Up
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Each begging for a metaphor,
A description,
At the very least recognition
Or just one adjectiveOh, the agony...to deny it...
Very powerful, Supes. Too bad we're not ever really free of it.
Until Alzheimers, that is!!
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LAST EDITED ON 01-27-03 AT 03:52 PM (EST)Very agonized, Supes. I really like it, especially this part: From the street, I look back to the heap
A poet’s wet dream
Equal parts bleakness,
Opportunity, and ##### Thank you for sharing this with us. 
Edited to say-very clever, Supes. At first I couldn't understand why that word showed up in your poem, but not when I copied it. Now I get it. Doh!
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