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samiam 5976 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 01-20-03, 09:22 PM (EST) "New Year's Day (FV)" It's really late, or early that halfway point at 3 a.m. sky brighter than it should be the mottled pink of frostbitten skin Watching through the window as the flakes begin falling along with bothersome tears Cappucino in one hand phone in the other leftover makeup smeared on my sleeve Storm intensifying outside and in -- a deluge of heart-rain surging as the glacier dissolves Phone resting uneasily in its cradle pulling my knees up to my chin, sniffling enfolded in my blanket a green poly/cotton womb The silent snow calms me and covers my anguish like tissue paper over a chest wound   Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

Subject     Author     Message Date     ID    RE: New Year's Day (FV) RudyRules 01-20-03 1  RE: New Year's Day (FV) Wheezy 01-21-03 2  RE: New Year's Day (FV) Red Lady 01-21-03 3    RE: New Year's Day (FV) SherpaDave 01-21-03 4    RE: New Year's Day (FV) L82LIFE 01-21-03 5  RE: New Year's Day (FV) Superman 01-23-03 6  RE: New Year's Day (FV) Mon Cherie 01-25-03 7  RE: New Year's Day (FV) echogirl 01-27-03 8

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RudyRules 8355 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 01-20-03, 10:58 PM (EST) 1. "RE: New Year's Day (FV)" Nice job sami, It really touched me. That poem says a lot that most of us can relate to at some point in our lives. One thing, you mispelled "sleeve". He has an extra e to go with the makeup on him! "Them people had to be pretty dumb to make their camp in a riverbed." - Rudy Boesch   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

Wheezy 9153 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 01-21-03, 09:37 AM (EST) 2. "RE: New Year's Day (FV)" >a deluge of heart-rain surging as the glacier dissolves Wow. This is a heart-wrenching poem of anguish. Amazingly well done--you have described the feelings of many in short and precise word pictures. For whatever happened to make you write this, I am extremely sorry. Gorgeous and painful. Thanks for posting it.   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

Red Lady 2009 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Roller Coaster Inaugurator" 01-21-03, 03:42 PM (EST) 3. "RE: New Year's Day (FV)" "The silent snow calms me and covers my anguish like tissue paper over a chest wound" Wow...the pain in this statement is so powerful. Your words are so well crafted throughout.   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

SherpaDave 8316 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 01-21-03, 03:58 PM (EST) 4. "RE: New Year's Day (FV)" Those are my favorite lines, too. Those four lines alone are a very powerful poem. With the rest of the stanzas, they complete the kill. Have I mentioned lately that Sami's writing rocks my world? Criminals From the Neck Up   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

L82LIFE 5333 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Playboy Centerfold" 01-21-03, 06:21 PM (EST) 5. "RE: New Year's Day (FV)" I have to agree that these lines are my favorites also. I love the entire poem, it's well written and creates a strong image in my mind. But the ending just reaches in and grabs you. Very, very powerful, Sami. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful piece with us.   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

Superman 3152 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Car Show Celebrity" 01-23-03, 09:56 PM (EST) 6. "RE: New Year's Day (FV)" Damn you're good. Superman - also loves the poem Criminals From the Neck Up   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

Mon Cherie 1811 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Herbal Healing Drugs Endorser" 01-25-03, 09:53 PM (EST) 7. "RE: New Year's Day (FV)" Thanks for sharing this, Sami. I need a Kleenex now. Mon   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

echogirl 2120 desperate attention whore postings DAW Level: "Roller Coaster Inaugurator" 01-27-03, 02:50 AM (EST) 8. "RE: New Year's Day (FV)" LAST EDITED ON 01-27-03 AT 02:51 AM (EST) Wow! This is seething with emotion! As Supes said, damn you're good! I especially like this: The silent snow calms me and covers my anguish like tissue paper over a chest wound This rocks! Great work Sami!   Remove | Alert Edit | Reply | Reply With Quote | Top

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