... Good EveningOther than business and screenplay boards, I've never posted. I admit it. I'm completely hooked.
Try this twist, beginning with a premise (at least I would write this in if I was a producer): Adam wants realism, and specifically, sincerity from the woman he chooses. I think he probably doesn't exit the bikini babes in mass, in part because I think he would probably want to give them a chance -- it is possible that a better looking woman (subjectively; I know) could "overall" be the best for him. Also, I think I might of observed, in a preview, at least one of the bikini babes interacting with him other than when just off the bus.
Now Adam's twist (thought I suspect, if it is this, it was suggested to him, as part of the "plot"): He brings in at least one particularly good looking man to temp the women; a kind of turnaround test that would both, obviously, help him find realism and sincerity. (I assume -- and hope -- that is what he wants.)
In the preview, Adam's twist was connected with a partial blocking of the front door from the inside. What would that have to do with Adam booting all the babes in bikinis? It looks like someone, or some people, is or are coming through that door. Of course that door scene could be disconnected from the voice-over -- another such trick.
I don't know if I give the decision makers the credit for thinking of that. It would be a twist on a twist that I would find fascinating to observe.
Enjoy The Show Guys,
JohnInPrinceton
PS Someone mentioned Melena. I doubt that, because it seems that even if she was not with Jason at that time, she wasn't interested in Adam enough to be part of that. I guess that she would be thoughtful enough not to get more exposure that way, considering the probably of hurting Adam twice. Also,the timeframe might of prohibited that from happening,
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