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"WSC 3 (FF) Chicken Pox and Rock Candy"
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"WSC 3 (FF) Chicken Pox and Rock Candy"

Chicken Pox and Rock Candy

I heard you died. But thought I'd give you call , maybe leave a message. Since I meant to call you one of these days anyway, there's still time, right?

I heard the stories about you. Some were whispered, just wisps I overheard when they thought I wasn't listening. I was always listening though. How are kids supposed to know what is going on if they don't listen when no one sees them? You were destructive, breaking things, breaking people. Selfish they said, even as a child, you were trouble.

I remember hearing about when my Daddy was your Daddy, and how he was afraid to leave you alone. How he would come home from work and you'd be hungry and filthy and crying in a crib, left alone all day. I heard about you smearing crap all over the walls when you were just five. How one of your many step daddies molested you when you were nine, but somehow it was all your fault. How you hated my mother and told her so, when you were just six. How you dragged me across the floor when I was a baby. I think she was afraid of you, my mother; even when I was little I knew she was afraid of you. I can't imagine anyone calling a child evil, but they said it about you. I wish I could hold the child you were then, make it all better, fix you so you weren't broken.

I remember when you came to visit, when your Daddy was my Daddy. You brought rock candy. I'll never forget the first time I ate rock candy. It was your candy, but you gave me some, and it was magical, so pretty and so tasty. Once at the house that looked over the mountain, you played me music. You put the headphones on me, and said, " This is Pink Floyd, you'll like it." I said the sounds were scary, I cried and said it was bad. Nana made you turn it off. But I lied. I liked it, but I got you in trouble and I don't know why. Nana loved you best. You needed her more. She knew that about you. We all lost her, but you lost her more.

I remember how you always loved horses. I think if Daddy hadn't got the chicken pox, he would have bought you one of your own. If he hadn’t died, you would have had a horse, and I would have had you for a sister, and your life wouldn't have been so hard. He would have fixed it all. We would have had horses and rock candy, and we wouldn't have been so broken.

I heard you died last week, I just thought I'd give you a call.

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  Subject     Author     Message Date     ID  
 *sniff* cqvenus 01-31-04 1
 RE: WSC 3 (FF) Chicken Pox and Roc... SherpaDave 02-01-04 2
 RE: WSC 3 (FF) Chicken Pox and Roc... Silvergirl1 02-01-04 3
 RE: WSC 3 (FF) Chicken Pox and Roc... northernlights 02-01-04 4
 RE: WSC 3 (FF) Chicken Pox and Roc... J I M B O 02-02-04 5
 RE: WSC 3 (FF) Chicken Pox and Roc... L82LIFE 02-02-04 6
 RE: WSC 3 (FF) Chicken Pox and Roc... Schnookie Palookie 02-02-04 7
 RE: WSC 3 (FF) Chicken Pox and Roc... nailbone 02-04-04 8

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1. "*sniff*"
awww buggy you made me cry!

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2. "RE: WSC 3 (FF) Chicken Pox and Rock Candy"
This kicks ass, Buggy. The whole thing is awesome, but I especially love the premise of calling someone after she's dead. This is just freaking great.


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3. "RE: WSC 3 (FF) Chicken Pox and Rock Candy"

Very haunting, dear Bug. I like it.

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4. "RE: WSC 3 (FF) Chicken Pox and Rock Candy"
Buggy hon...you're amazing! That was so good! It gave me chills.


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Loved it.

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6. "RE: WSC 3 (FF) Chicken Pox and Rock Candy"
Oh Buggy Sweetie, this is wonderful. Very touching and sincere and beautiful. I'm sitting here in tears because I'm so moved by this piece.

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.

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Oh Buggy, that was wonderful! Everything you write touches me. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
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8. "RE: WSC 3 (FF) Chicken Pox and Rock Candy"
Wow. Very nice. Very sad.


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