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"SSC (PY) Maelstrom"
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samiam 5976 desperate attention whore postings
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07-11-01, 03:02 PM (EST)
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"SSC (PY) Maelstrom"
Different in style, mood, and, unfortunately, caliber than what I usually come up with. Oh well


Movement in the
darkness, flickering shadow
Trees pulled by the wind
Shifting and a slow advance
in the iron sky above

And I'm standing
on a hill in a field
waiting for the rain

This time I will not dance
I will not shout or sing
I will not revel in the chaos
No, not this time

I will numb myself in the cold storm
and fade into the shadows
I will be shiftless in the violence
Unmoving in the rain

I saw the stormclouds coming
And I'm standing
on a hill in a field
waiting for the rain.

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  Subject     Author     Message Date     ID  
 RE: SSC (PY) Maelstrom Drive My Car 07-11-01 1
 RE: SSC (PY) Maelstrom ItzLisa 07-12-01 2
 RE: SSC (PY) Maelstrom desert_rhino 07-12-01 3
   RE: SSC (PY) Maelstrom samiam 07-13-01 7
 Sami is a poet Survivorchick 07-12-01 4
   RE: Sami is a poet samiam 07-12-01 5
       RE: Sami is a poet aymelek 07-12-01 6

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Drive My Car 20045 desperate attention whore postings
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07-11-01, 03:11 PM (EST)
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1. "RE: SSC (PY) Maelstrom"
I could feel this storm sami.
Loved this

EBug

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07-12-01, 09:31 AM (EST)
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2. "RE: SSC (PY) Maelstrom"
Wow!!! I'm kind of in this mood myself today, Sami, so I could really relate to this. Wonderful job!

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07-12-01, 09:37 AM (EST)
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3. "RE: SSC (PY) Maelstrom"
Heh... I like this. I've felt this way from time to time.

Too bad "I am a ROCK" is often followed by "I am a SNIPER."

-- JV


OMG! {click} It's so SOFT and CUDDLY!!

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samiam 5976 desperate attention whore postings
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07-13-01, 03:14 PM (EST)
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7. "RE: SSC (PY) Maelstrom"
*grin*

"How do you know I'm mad?" asked Alice.
"You must be," said the Cat, "or you wouldn't have come here."

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07-12-01, 05:55 PM (EST)
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4. "Sami is a poet"
This is wonderful Sami. It gives me strength just to read it. Thank you for belssing us all with your talent. I appreciate it.

Survivorchick

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samiam 5976 desperate attention whore postings
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07-12-01, 05:59 PM (EST)
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5. "RE: Sami is a poet"
Thank you! And for you, some refrigerator magnet poetry (because I liked yours so much):

summer whispers like a delicate gown
on bare white skin
and lingers like water in delirious runes
peach roses chant music
under a rusty moon
lazy as honey and blood
we watch the dream rain fall
in the frantic garden
a storm of bitter ache
but smelling of life

sami

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07-12-01, 06:09 PM (EST)
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6. "RE: Sami is a poet"
Sami, both of these are wonderful! I've been on that hill MANY times. And I LOVE refigerator magnet poems because you don't need Spell Check!!!

*hugs*

Aymelek

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