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35. "The interactive role of Feedback"
LAST EDITED ON 08-01-01 AT 01:44 PM (EST)

Edited to laugh at myself for making a thank you speech like I had won an award. All I mean to do is tell people that I love it when you make comments about specifics and I really believe it helps create a group piece in a round-robin like this.
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Thanks, everyone!
I appreciate that it's hard to pull specifics out of such a long piece, as AyaK said. But you know how we writers are (some of us) uncertain of whether things worked at all. Any specific feedback you can manage on how the last part worked out--especially how the characters, strategies and voting played out and what they may have set up--I would most certainly enjoy your efforts.

As you may have noticed, I treated your comments on the earlier parts as feedback I could coordinate into the plot--as I tried to do with feedback on all the episodes:

RudyRules, DK, and AyaK were particularly helpful: the first 2 in suggesting other dimensions to their characters that I had not yet addressed

AyaK for all the specific feedback plus chiding me about confidentiality--lol, I had noticed I was breaking some contractual rules, for sure, but I had titled it "Unofficial" from the get-go for a reason!

As for GT, her many posts kept me going. I encourage everyone to help the writers the way she has done--by engaging with the plot! I love her little frowny faces when she posts her disgruntlement at this sucky game.

Not Sleeve, by posting on the spoiler that the guy in the RC couldn't be him because he wasn't wearing a shirt, gave me the idea of having Sleeeve take OFF his shirt, which turned the tides on his success with women!

I think it's the most fun to interact while writing!

Quick explanation for those of you who wait until movies come out on video to watch them: my ending plays on the recent film noir, Memento.

The main character has no short-term memory (due to trauma, not hypnisis)and knows in advance that he will forget what happens, so he has to write "memos" on his body and other things to remind himself of what happened in the past and whom he can trust. If you haven't seen it, you were probably going huh, where did that come from at the end...

Thanks again for all your patience, except for Superman, who teased me mercilessly and he's just lucky I didn't resurrect him and give HIM an assignment. *Hugs the funny Superhero*

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  Subject     Author     Message Date     ID  
 BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody You C...   Outfrontgirl     07-27-01       
   RE: BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody Y...   Outfrontgirl     07-27-01     1  
     RE: BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody Y...   ItzLisa     07-27-01     4  
   That's Just About Enough Face Time....   IceCat     07-27-01     2  
   ahhhhh should have expected it   dabo     07-27-01     3  
   Theme Song   AyatollahKhomeini     07-27-01     5  
     RE: Theme Song   ItzLisa     07-27-01     7  
   RE: BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody Y...   AyatollahKhomeini     07-27-01     6  
   RE: This is great!   janisella     07-27-01     8  
   RE: BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody Y...   RudyRules     07-27-01     9  
   RE: BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody Y...   MakeItStop     07-27-01     10  
     RE: BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody Y...   LadyT     07-27-01     11  
     RE: BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody Y...   Kismet     07-28-01     14  
   RE: BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody Y...   George Tirebiter     07-27-01     12  
     LMAO   George Tirebiter     07-27-01     13  
   RE: BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody Y...   dangerkitty     07-28-01     15  
     RE: BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody Y...   George Tirebiter     07-28-01     16  
   Part 2 is up   Outfrontgirl     07-30-01     17  
     RE: Part 2 is up   Lisapooh     07-30-01     20  
   RE: BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody Y...   MakeItStop     07-30-01     18  
   Hooray   AyatollahKhomeini     07-30-01     19  
   RE: BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody Y...   George Tirebiter     07-30-01     21  
     Getting some   Outfrontgirl     07-30-01     22  
         E10? or E11?   AyatollahKhomeini     07-30-01     24  
             RE: E10? or E11?   Outfrontgirl     07-30-01     25  
   RE: BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody Y...   idiotcowboy     07-30-01     23  
   RE: BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody Y...   dangerkitty     07-30-01     26  
   RE: BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody Y...   RudyRules     07-31-01     27  
   RE: BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody Y...   ItzLisa     07-31-01     28  
   BUMP! DONE! COMPLETE!   Outfrontgirl     08-01-01     29  
   RE: BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody Y...   LadyT     08-01-01     30  
   The Legendary E9   AyatollahKhomeini     08-01-01     31  
   YOU DID IT!!! :)   dabo     08-01-01     32  
   RE: BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody Y...   MakeItStop     08-01-01     33  
   RE: BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody Y...   RudyRules     08-01-01     34  
   The interactive role of Feedback   Outfrontgirl     08-01-01     35  
   RE: BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody Y...   dangerkitty     08-01-01     36  
   RE: BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody Y...   ItzLisa     08-01-01     37  
   WAAAAAAH-HOOOOOO!   George Tirebiter     08-01-01     38  
   RE: BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody Y...   mistofleas     08-01-01     39  
   RE: BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody Y...   Survivorchick     08-01-01     40  
   I've Been a Baaaaad, Baaaaad Cat...   IceCat     08-01-01     41  
     RE: I've Been a Baaaaad, Baaaaad Ca...   Outfrontgirl     08-02-01     46  
     RE: I've Been a Baaaaad, Baaaaad Ca...   George Tirebiter     08-03-01     48  
   RE: BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody Y...   VampKira     08-01-01     42  
   RE: BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody Y...   dabo     08-02-01     43  
     RE: BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody Y...   dabo     08-03-01     47  
         RE: BV Ep 9: If You Want Somebody Y...   dabo     08-04-01     49  
   Powerful stuff   flying squirrel     08-02-01     44  
     RE: Powerful stuff   Outfrontgirl     08-02-01     45  

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