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ShakesvivorBlows 24 desperate attention whore postings
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06-16-01, 10:45 AM (EST)
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"SSC/PY "Puppetmaster""
I liked to watch the beautiful people
on the end of silky strings
I watched them dance and see them cry
My hands became their wings

I controled their hopes, their thoughts,
Their dreams, truth said, their very lives
With a single snap of my wrist
Their movement was all mine

I stood above my stage one day
And to my horror I did see
The puppets all looking up
They took control from me

Gepetto, I used to call myself
Back when I ruled you
I hid my face, to hide the fact
Twas my nose that grew


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  Subject     Author     Message Date     ID  
 RE: SSC/PY "Puppetmaster" Kismet 06-16-01 1
 RE: SSC/PY "Puppetmaster" dangerkitty 06-16-01 2
 RE: SSC/PY "Puppetmaster" VampKira 06-16-01 3
   Thanks, but no thank you.... shakes the clown 06-16-01 4
       RE: Thanks, but no thank you.... Cherberrie 06-17-01 5
 RE: SSC/PY "Puppetmaster" darbygrl 07-06-01 6

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Kismet 802 desperate attention whore postings
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06-16-01, 11:23 AM (EST)
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1. "RE: SSC/PY "Puppetmaster""
Well done SB. I'm surprised to see you surface on a Saturday. Things that make you go Hmmmm.... Are you going to change your name to BlowsVivor Sucks? It's a great poem but Shakes' work tends to be a little darker. (Of course if you are Shakes you would know that and lighten it up some). If you win the contest will you come clean?

Still awesome work. The part where the puppets look up creeped me out.

Kismet

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dangerkitty 1913 desperate attention whore postings
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06-16-01, 12:14 PM (EST)
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2. "RE: SSC/PY "Puppetmaster""
Hey, this is good! I love that image of the puppets looking up. But come on, it ain't just your nose that's growing!

dangerkitty


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VampKira 4433 desperate attention whore postings
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06-16-01, 11:20 PM (EST)
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3. "RE: SSC/PY "Puppetmaster""
Very nice job, SVB.. very nice indeed.. I am surprised that you have entered the contest though.. I thought your original intention was to spoil the show??? Has the clowns demise changed your agenda?? Are you lost now?? LOL!

You know.. by using his sig head.. he may just be able to claim this work as his own!


w.l.s.f.c.
Du ar min hjälte, Supermänniska


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shakes the clown 3366 desperate attention whore postings
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06-16-01, 11:59 PM (EST)
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4. "Thanks, but no thank you...."
>You know.. by using his sig
>head.. he may just be
>able to claim this work
>as his own!

...why on Earth would I want to take credit for such a horrible attempt at poetry. One thing I've noticed about this contest is that it has brought every idiot who can figure out how to rhyme flying out of the woodwork. SB ought to offer a class here on the OT.....Poetry for Retards 101......first lecture: Meter.

Seriously, this was sooo bad, it actually hurt to read.

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Cherberrie 1285 desperate attention whore postings
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06-17-01, 10:44 AM (EST)
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5. "RE: Thanks, but no thank you...."
Silly, clown...now I know you ARE SVB; there's no more question about it in my mind! You gave it away in two simple little posts. First of all, you posted poetry that reeks of your signature writing style (a very good writing style, mind you). Then you conveniently throw in a couple of "missed meters." And, finally, you critique your own poetry. You NEVER critique anything on this board. So, by virtue of the fact that you critiqued this poetry indicates that it is your own.

Nice try, but your smoke and mirrors don't fool me!



Cherberrie

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darbygrl 293 desperate attention whore postings
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07-06-01, 09:01 AM (EST)
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6. "RE: SSC/PY "Puppetmaster""
wow......that was a wild poem. I really like it.

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darbygrl

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